Ken accepted the manuscript and flipped through it, scanning the contents. Once he'd finished, he handed it back to Tsuruya with a nervous smile.

"It's - inspirational," he offered. "How will the special effects be managed?"

Something else nagged at him, something he couldn't quite place. It was reassuring, to see the events rewritten that way; things had all worked out for the best. But...

No, she'd worked hard on this. He'd feel odd offering a critique, however minor. Besides, what did he know about film?